The two most stand-out things about this piece of writing is 1) how honed in on Artemy's POV it is, and 2) how nitty-gritty it gets into discussing bodies. The writing style is so much like getting Artemy's stream of consciousness. It's really heavily filtered through his own ideas and perceptions of the world, and indeed Daniil. I like the hints of snarky humour that we get glimpses of in canon and how... intimate, I suppose, it is to have such close access to a character's thought patterns/process.
Secondly, porn seldom deals with the realities of bodies and it just feels so appropriate, both for a kink like this one and coming from Artemy the surgeon/doctor/menkhu who does have to deal with the realities of anatomy and physiology on a day-to-day basis.
Finally, shout-out to Daniil's initial clinical approach, which felt very in character (and hot), plus the little give aways of how into it he gets, 'liking his lips', his 'delighted look', etc. Bravo!
Re: daniil/artemy, erotic prostate massage
Secondly, porn seldom deals with the realities of bodies and it just feels so appropriate, both for a kink like this one and coming from Artemy the surgeon/doctor/menkhu who does have to deal with the realities of anatomy and physiology on a day-to-day basis.
Finally, shout-out to Daniil's initial clinical approach, which felt very in character (and hot), plus the little give aways of how into it he gets, 'liking his lips', his 'delighted look', etc. Bravo!