Someone wrote in [community profile] pathologicroundrobin 2020-04-03 10:55 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: Daniil Dankovsky/Alexander Block

Oh, this was great! Very convincing glove-kink with a lot of nice physical descriptors. Then there's some really interesting hints about the way Daniil views himself through Block's outside perspective.

Favourite line is "Block finds himself breathing fast, like a hunted animal." It's very evocative and has this lovely blend of something primal, but also kind of vulnerable. Just lovely use of language overall. Excellent work!

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