Someone wrote in [community profile] pathologicroundrobin 2020-03-17 11:48 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL!

This was great! I loved the dreamlike quality of this with how it slipped from one person to another with the shifts happening because of Daniil latching onto one idea and using it as a springboard to the next. It felt very fantasy-y. I also liked how his mind went to Eva first, considering where he was, and the line "...vulnerable in this borrowed bed," to exemplify that. I also really liked how he imagined different sorts of dynamics with everyone he thought about.

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